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Just giving a light impression here, as you requested honesty- I believe your first hurdle is your thumbnails. They have far too much going on, too much text, and IMO the style actually makes me scroll past without reading because my mind reads them as being advertisements. Like the ads for insurance placed in my Youtube scroll amongst videos I'm actually interested in.
I am an early thirties person from the US who spends probably five hours a day with Youtube on in the background while I am working. My favorite game of all time is Gothic, I hang out in that community online, so your accent is definitely not going to put me off. I am almost certainly your target demographic, haha.
So, my advice.
The video I was interested in was "A Macedonian Retro Christmas".
- Less cluttered thumbnails.
If I'm looking for something to watch on my phone, I'm not reading all that.
As a customer, you're not just not getting me to walk in the door, you're not even getting me to realize you're even open for business.
- Subtitles.
I can understand you well, but I know that my immediate friend group in the US would not be able to. They might still be interested in your content though, long-form or Shorts. But you'd need subtitles. For long-form content, just putting your script into the closed-captions might be fine- but I suggest putting a little on-screen note in the first ten seconds of your video that CC is available. For Shorts, use captions for EVERYTHING you say. The kids just want to see that in their content these days, haha.
I love your voice though! Definitely keep talking in your videos.
- Introduction.
If I've never clicked on your channel before, you have less than fifteen seconds to convince me to stay. Your video is great, but it opens with a VERY loud, short and (sorry) unsatisfying intro. You need a better hook. It literally doesn't have to be something flashy- but it definitely shouldn't be so much audibly louder than your actual content.
As a viewer, if you blast my ears out in the first second, I'm clicking off.
Beyond that, think about what I will see if I hover over your video with my mouse. If I already think your thumbnails look like an ad, that hover-over that shows me the first few seconds of your video also looks like an ad to me.
Overall, what I'm trying to say is that I don't even think the immediate issues lie in your content itself. I think the issue lies in navigating the youtube landscape and understanding what gets people to click.
I think I would suggest, given your style of content, to look at the thumbnails of Slope's Game Room, Accursed Farms and Mandalore Gaming to get a better idea of what I mean when I say "less cluttered". I would also examine how each of those channels produces a "hook" in the first five seconds of their videos to get you to want to stick around.
Best of luck!
I am an early thirties person from the US who spends probably five hours a day with Youtube on in the background while I am working. My favorite game of all time is Gothic, I hang out in that community online, so your accent is definitely not going to put me off. I am almost certainly your target demographic, haha.
So, my advice.
The video I was interested in was "A Macedonian Retro Christmas".
- Less cluttered thumbnails.
If I'm looking for something to watch on my phone, I'm not reading all that.
As a customer, you're not just not getting me to walk in the door, you're not even getting me to realize you're even open for business.
- Subtitles.
I can understand you well, but I know that my immediate friend group in the US would not be able to. They might still be interested in your content though, long-form or Shorts. But you'd need subtitles. For long-form content, just putting your script into the closed-captions might be fine- but I suggest putting a little on-screen note in the first ten seconds of your video that CC is available. For Shorts, use captions for EVERYTHING you say. The kids just want to see that in their content these days, haha.
I love your voice though! Definitely keep talking in your videos.
- Introduction.
If I've never clicked on your channel before, you have less than fifteen seconds to convince me to stay. Your video is great, but it opens with a VERY loud, short and (sorry) unsatisfying intro. You need a better hook. It literally doesn't have to be something flashy- but it definitely shouldn't be so much audibly louder than your actual content.
As a viewer, if you blast my ears out in the first second, I'm clicking off.
Beyond that, think about what I will see if I hover over your video with my mouse. If I already think your thumbnails look like an ad, that hover-over that shows me the first few seconds of your video also looks like an ad to me.
Overall, what I'm trying to say is that I don't even think the immediate issues lie in your content itself. I think the issue lies in navigating the youtube landscape and understanding what gets people to click.
I think I would suggest, given your style of content, to look at the thumbnails of Slope's Game Room, Accursed Farms and Mandalore Gaming to get a better idea of what I mean when I say "less cluttered". I would also examine how each of those channels produces a "hook" in the first five seconds of their videos to get you to want to stick around.
Best of luck!