Denied Dishonored 1 Review/Jackoragen Second Application

[Deleted member 819841]

Mission 1
Corvo The main Character
Around age of the 40 he Goes To send
a Message To The Queen Wich They Have
feeling to each other secretly and He
Goes Give here The massage then
a group of men on top of the rof come and kill his Love and Kidnapped his daughter
the High Guard and royal think hes the killer come and send him to prison then the have burned his face and he will never Forget that they send him to prison and a guard gave him a key for his prison cell
he takes the key sword escape of the prison and the gurad noticed him he goes for in close friend and take him to a place
build him a mask and slept
while sleeping he met in his dream
someone gave him a ring for telport
Mission 2
You Go To The guy That burned you
castle and You find a girl tell you
save my uncle he want to posin
his drink and kill my uncle
You move on and find a guy
that a guard want to kill him
you save the guy and climb the castl
You go And put the posin drink
to the guy that burned you drink
he get poisoned and die you save
here uncle
Mission 3
You go to a beer factory
And Go to help the owners
and go to the hm hm a love hotel
because in that hotel your daughter
is prisoner you kill the twins
Wich put your daughter here and
save your daughter and take her
to the town
Mission 4
you need to find
a crazy man that make
healt potion but he's pretty guarded
you go to a bridge and go turn off
the power so they go fix it you go through
and find the crazy man wich know about
the pepole who prisoned you
you go make him sleep and take
him with you
Mission 5
you go make the crazy man to tell
you about them he refused pull
out some rats he tell you
you go to there party and
take a invite ticket wich they let you
through and someone tell you gave
go get me the boyle lady and you need to
figure out wich lady Boyle he means he
tells you stuff about here you take here to
him and go
Mission 6
You go back to
the beginning place wich you go up
and sneak to kill one of the royal member
Mission 7
You go to kill the guy that killed the queen
You go and find his men the go take your
stuff and put you in a cell you break out
and take back your stuff And make
a very complicated strategy to kill him
mission 8
You go back and find out
they guy that help you a guard wich
help you betrayed you to take emily
and kill you yo take emily and run
mission 9
You go to kill him
he's guard for good
nothing matters you kill gurads open
places that never opened for years to kill
him you find him toke
all bodies you killed the royal members
to make a tea party you kill him take emily
emily is now the beq queen of the empire
Story: 10
Gameplay: 7
side quest:8.5
Characters 7.5
Overall:8.5


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[bjork]

This is another one that's a synopsis and not a review. Putting scores at the end is fine, but what about the game made you arrive at those numbers? That's what should be in the body of a review, not a cliff's note version of the story.

 

[Yousef]

Basically what bjork said. I’d advise looking at other apps to better gauge how apps work, and also please read Article Guidelines and Review Guidelines before you post.