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[Samatonic Samatonic]

@Samatonic I want to share some verses, but I don't know much about poetry.

It's alright if I write some from an author?
For example I wanted to try translating some from a famous book from my country.

I would love to read it, please by all means go right ahead, you have the entire floor.

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i'll let you guys fill in the blank.

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Bees make honey
I make C___y

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Bees make honey
I make C___y

 

[secreto7]

Attempted translation by me, I tried to make it rhyme but I couldn't.
First stanza.

Here I start to sing
To the beat of the guitar,
That the man who's kept awake
By estrordinary pain
Like the solitary bird
With song finds solace

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Aquí me pongo a cantar
Al compás de la vigüela,
Que el hombre que lo desvela
Una pena estordinaria,
Como la ave solitaria
Con el cantar se consuela.

By the protagonist, Martín Fierro, from the book "Martín Fierro" (1872) by writer and poet José Hernández.
Note: the spelling mistakes are intended by the author.

 

[Ruky Ruky]

Favorite place to have fun, GO!

 

[Samatonic Samatonic]

Did the stars not align the night we met, or was the string that struck just slightly off ?
Was it the sky that misread our names, or our hearts that mistimed the song ?

 

[secreto7]

When I'm not distracted by the whirlwind of things that are happening, I wish to come here more too.

 

[Samatonic Samatonic]

When I'm not distracted by the whirlwind of things that are happening, I wish to come here more too.

Fight it, they're scared of foolishly strong people.

(Seriously be careful mate)

 

[secreto7]

Fight it, they're scared of foolishly strong people.

(Seriously be careful mate)

I hope I don't end up like Kamina or Shinji