Denied The Walking Dead 1 Episode 1 Review

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The Start With You Being Lee You Where Being Send To Prison For Mur**r Of The Guy That Slept With Lee Wife He Was Talking With The Officer Untill The Saw A Thingy Walking The Officer Wasn't Paying attention For The Road The Crash in To him You Try To Escape From The Car Then The officer Is Laying Down You Check On Him The He is A Walker You Shot Him Find a Girl 10 Zombies Jump On You Lee Luckily Escaped He Goes In house And He slipped Then He Checked The House Found A Radio The A Walker Show up You Fight him The Girl Bring You a Hammer You Smash him then You Find 2 guys You help them With There Broken Car You Go to There Ranch You Go there The Bandage Your Broken Foot You Sleep Find Lenny Talk With Him And You Talk with that Boy He Has a father The Guy That bandage You Kenny With his Wife and Son You Talk and Then You Talk With The Boy Son and Zombie Come Over the Fence They Where Improving You Have The Choice Either Help Kenny Sun Duck Or the Boy That helped You i Choice To Help the Boy That helped us He Died The boy that i try to Save He say Get Out of My Farm We go With Kenny and In the way we Find a Zombie The attack us We ran of Untill reached A drug Store Wich Had pepole Lived There the saved us And duck Had Blood On his Body the Host of the place larry Say He was Bittin i said No then we Was Fighting untill a zombie Attacked a dore Wich The girl Clementine Was Against I saved here then Larry had a heart attack i go Do some stuff fixing a Girl Radio And Lee relized this Is His Father Drugstore He Find His brother as a zombie He ki**ed him so he get a key to get Pills For Larry Heart attack We go to Find One guy that we decided to send him off We find him and save a girl she said gave us a gun i say no she fight us then she di* we go Back And What a Raid of Zombies attacked the Drugstore We Have a choice or to save Carley The girl With The Radio Or doug i Saved carley closed the door with a wood and tey to escape untill lary With His Head Slammed Us We go Down And Kenny go Help us to get up We escape to a Mottor inn And We talk with larry And Next On the Walking dead Episode 2...
Gameplay 8.5
Story 9
Choices 8.5
Graphics 8
Overall 8.8
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[bjork]

This isn't so much a review as it is a synopsis. It also needs another pass to actually edit for punctuation and making sure every word isn't capitalized.