Guild Application The Raise Of Gaming

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Article about Raise of gaming Jackoragen 3rd application


back in the 50s The first Game ever Released called tennis for two it's a game like tennis but which you're a wall that deflect a ball


After several years
pong released
Pong is like ping pong but
you're a wall that Deflect a ball so it goes
through the goal in the arcade
the game went viral why it went viral because
it had a count to how many time it got through
and then after years


Space invader relased the developer
wanted the alien to be fast
but the system was bad
so he put them slow but the game release
and the system will make them faster
as you kill more so progressive difficulty
have been created


Then in the Late 80s the term gamers has ben created wich mean a person that play
games every day and with Atari and the
ET movie wich in the time was popular
and Atari went to a DEV of the movie they told him to make a game about it
he only had few weeks so christmas
come and sales go up he made the game
gamers played it the wanted to never play video games agian atari crashed the movie
is a now hated the game is unplayable
you don't know what you are doing in game
untill...


after years the gaming industry
is a little popular to popular
then company like sega
Nintendo have been in the market
with each having there own mascot
sega with sonic Nintendo with Mario
let's go a little back


Nintendo wanted make a Popeye game
but they cant afford the license
so the made donkey kong as
this big guy that kidnapp olive
Pauline as olive
mario is Popeye


Sega's sonic mascot was inspired by
dragon ball's Goku


in this battle Nintendo was winning untill 1996
Sony made Play station but wait
what is this company sony
sony is a Japanese company that made
rice cooker it cook the rice in a way ideal
for chopsticks that mostly burn you're rice
and cameras home tv


in the time snes was 16 bits
ps1 had 32 bits and was easier to make games Nintendo had no chance of winning


untill Nintendo made Nintendo 64
that had 64 bits And 5 MB of games because of cartridge
side note it was bad
then sony made ps2 had 128 bits
and a small little company came
xbox they American company release
xbox original that had a controller
that can break you head so they had
to do a smaller controler for Japanese pepole sega made there Dreamcast
wich made sega never make console's
Nintendo release GameCube wich was
the best and the most underrated one
and let's talk about
mortal Kombat this game
was so Violence it made the age requirement system


and street fighter wich had a combo
that was a glitch that had a
stun attack with light attack's
wich made history
going back to our point


sony mad in E3 announced the ps3 design
wich no one liked they had to go on
with the ps2 design with a new features
2005 Xbox relased Xbox 360 A SUCCESS
PS3 ALSO A SUCCESS
wii Was the best
Nintendo with the wii had the mothin tracking
in the controller which tracked
what you where doing genius
people back didn't have the required stuff
to make track and thing
sony was mad how there have capture
we not they released a imitative version of wii wich failed


Nintendo always saved the best for
last
but not this time wii u
a Wii but portable failed ps4 and xbox one
Xbox one need to have device so you can
play with it and gamepass wich was good
you need it to play online even with
already bought games which the winner
was ps4


Years later Switch released
wich had the lowest system
but still the best in sales
then
ps5 and Xbox in the same time
released ps5 didn't have a lot of games and
graphics different it had remakes remastered or the same game
Xbox series x had the best GPU
and graphic


Some tips i want to say


Nintendo keeps releaseing there consoles
first 40% of the time it fails


sony please dont keep making the same
console and call it New Generation


xbox remove that even bought games
need gamepass to play online you have the right if you have the game in gamepass


i hope you all mods admin
Like it and accept it

The End ...

 

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I'm not trying to be mean, but unless this is intended to be freeform poetry, this isn't an article; it reads like notes someone jotted down while watching a "history of games" video essay. I can't speak on behalf of the site and whoever approves these things, but I will say that if you're legitimately interested in having an article, go read the others that are already on the site. Take note of how they use things like sentence structure and punctuation. Good luck.

 

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Hey, not trying to be harsh or anything, but I think this could be improved a bit:

• Grammar & punctuation: Some punctuation’s missing, and a few sentences feel off. Cleaning that up would make it way more legibly written.
• Tone: It might benefit from a slightly more formal tone, just enough to feel polished without losing personality.
• Formatting: There are quite a few indentations. Reducing them could make the layout cleaner and easier to follow.

(I really hope this helps!)

(My "fixed" version)
After a few years, Pong was released. It’s like ping pong, but you’re a wall deflecting a ball into a goal. The game went viral in arcades because it had a score counter, simple, addictive, and revolutionary.

Then came Space Invaders. The developer wanted fast-moving aliens, but the hardware couldn’t handle it. So he made them slow. But as players shot more aliens, the system sped up, creating one of the first examples of progressive difficulty.

In the late ’80s, the term “gamer” was born, someone who plays video games daily. Around this time, Atari partnered with the creators of the E.T. movie to make a game. The developers only had a few weeks before Christmas. The game launched, sold well… and then players hated it. It was confusing, rushed, and nearly unplayable. Atari crashed, and E.T. became one of the most infamous games ever.

Years later, gaming bounced back. Companies like Sega and Nintendo entered the market, each with their own mascots, Sonic the hedgehog and Super Mario. Let’s rewind a bit:

Nintendo originally wanted to make a Popeye game but couldn’t get the license. So they made Donkey Kong instead. Mario was Popeye, Pauline was Olive, and Donkey Kong was Bluto.

Sega’s Sonic? Inspired by Dragon Ball’s Goku.

Nintendo dominated until 1996, when Sony dropped the PlayStation. Wait, Sony? The company that made rice cookers, cameras, and TVs? Yep. And their console had 32-bit power, while the SNES was still at 16-bit. Game developers flocked to Sony.

Nintendo responded with the Nintendo 64, 64-bit, but limited to 5 Megabyte (5MB) cartridges. Then Sony released the PlayStation 2 with 128-bit power. A new challenger appeared: Xbox, an American company. The original Xbox had a massive controller nicknamed “The Duke” that was later resized for Japanese players.

Sega released the Dreamcast, which flopped so hard they exited the console business. Nintendo launched the GameCube, underrated, but loved by many.

Meanwhile, Mortal Kombat was so violent it helped create the age rating system known as ESRB ratings. Street Fighter had a combo glitch that became a core mechanic and changed fighting games forever.

Fast forward to E3: Sony revealed the PlayStation 3 (PS3) design. Fans hated it, so they stuck with a more traditional look. In 2005, Xbox launched the Xbox 360 a huge success. PS3 also did well. But Nintendo’s Wii stole the show with motion controls. It was genius. Sony tried to copy it, but their version flopped.

Then came the Wii U… and it failed. PlayStation 4 (PS4) and Xbox One launched. Xbox required extra devices and Game Pass, even for games you already owned. PS4 took the win.

Years later, Nintendo released the Switch. It had the weakest hardware but dominated in sales.

Then came the PlayStation 5 (PS5) and Xbox Series X. PS5 had few new games, mostly remasters. Xbox had better graphics and GPU power.

(So long story short, this could use some fixing.)

Edit: I hate this character limit >:(