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The ONE thing that kills my enjoyment of books is when a character is richly built, allowed to have some serious flaws, and put in an unwinnable (or, at the very least, very harsh) situation, then the author invents a half-baked excuse to save them or spare them punishment almost completely, effectively undoing everything that came before that moment in a way that's usually not even clever.
Like... "Yeah, you just confessed some major crimes on a letter home. A letter that's implied to be read by staff before reaching its destination. Don't worry, though! You have suffered enough! No juvie for you! Here's a gold star for honesty!". <--- Not a literal example, but almost.
I swear, some of the best stories I have ever read refuse to hold their leads accountable even after portraying in the worst light ever to sell a "breakthrough" arc later. It just doesn't work for me and it makes me feel cheated of my time after enjoying a good story throughout the damn book.
Do you have any examples of this?
Like... "Yeah, you just confessed some major crimes on a letter home. A letter that's implied to be read by staff before reaching its destination. Don't worry, though! You have suffered enough! No juvie for you! Here's a gold star for honesty!". <--- Not a literal example, but almost.
I swear, some of the best stories I have ever read refuse to hold their leads accountable even after portraying in the worst light ever to sell a "breakthrough" arc later. It just doesn't work for me and it makes me feel cheated of my time after enjoying a good story throughout the damn book.
Do you have any examples of this?